While I do like the MC and the highlighting of disabilities, the writing is kinda...okay, and the art is so inconsistent between panels; sometimes characters have 6 fingers, sometimes 4, and usually all fingers are the same length, and the postures and proportions are wonky, especially for full-body shots.
With a little refinement and time, this probably could have developed into something really great, the groundwork is there. But I can't imagine paying for these chapters as-is
While I do like the MC and the highlighting of disabilities, the writing is kinda...okay, and the art is so inconsistent between panels; sometimes characters have 6 fingers, sometimes 4, and usually all fingers are the same length, and the postures and proportions are wonky, especially for full-body shots.
With a little refinement and time, this probably could have developed into something really great, the groundwork is there. But I can't imagine paying for these chapters as-is