i don't wanna be rude but i think the author should seek assistance in writing if they wish to continue making manhwas in the future. obviously they excel in art but their story writing is just not it. their first work was kinda okay and took off because of the art, but still had some off and distasteful parts. kinda was hoping they improved with this one but it got worse
i don't wanna be rude but i think the author should seek assistance in writing if they wish to continue making manhwas in the future. obviously they excel in art but their story writing is just not it. their first work was kinda okay and took off because of the art, but still had some off and distasteful parts. kinda was hoping they improved with this one but it got worse