**really long rant** This is like my story, I loved every chapter! But I couldn't get passed the sa in like the second chapter, but after finishing the story it felt so forced in and not in character? Like a fetish more then a plot point... The persuasive sex and non con nature is fine in the main story, I get it he was basically a personal prostitute but it never felt like he was being held down and hurt just annoyed and nervous. That chapter is just too much, I can excuse a lot, and I get that it's so the ml(I'm really bad at names) learns his lesson on being an absolute garbage person but he was already that, we didn't have to add an assult charge out right to do that. Maybe I'm just spoiled by other stories with evil but not sa my partner evil Mls in other stories...? It feels like a non issue on the outside but I like need to know why that explicit sa scene was so important and needed, and if people liked it like, why? I love noncon (cnc PLAY), and story elements that use it correctly SUCH AS prostitution storylines like this in a very fictional or correct setting but there's always been this like mental line where it stops being fun even for me especially when I want the characters to actually love and care about each other...
**really long rant**
This is like my story, I loved every chapter! But I couldn't get passed the sa in like the second chapter, but after finishing the story it felt so forced in and not in character? Like a fetish more then a plot point... The persuasive sex and non con nature is fine in the main story, I get it he was basically a personal prostitute but it never felt like he was being held down and hurt just annoyed and nervous. That chapter is just too much, I can excuse a lot, and I get that it's so the ml(I'm really bad at names) learns his lesson on being an absolute garbage person but he was already that, we didn't have to add an assult charge out right to do that. Maybe I'm just spoiled by other stories with evil but not sa my partner evil Mls in other stories...? It feels like a non issue on the outside but I like need to know why that explicit sa scene was so important and needed, and if people liked it like, why? I love noncon (cnc PLAY), and story elements that use it correctly SUCH AS prostitution storylines like this in a very fictional or correct setting but there's always been this like mental line where it stops being fun even for me especially when I want the characters to actually love and care about each other...