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Yep, ticked all my don'ts. Thanks for the warning, kind stranger!( ꈍᴗꈍ)
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Yep, ticked all my don'ts. Thanks for the warning, kind stranger!( ꈍᴗꈍ)
You're welcome
Yes, the art style is amazing, but here's some things I didn't like:
-loopholes: either forgotten or never talked about
-threesome in ch14. Absolutely unnecessary and somehow forgotten about??? They never talk about it again. And I kept thinking about it all the time! The couple already liked each other, why did Sol have to join in??? Especially when he never did anything with the uke before??
-the seme knows his brother is dating Sol (the guy who fucked his boyfriend aka who he had a threesome with) but never once did he warn him about Sol!! Dude, your brother is getting into a relationship with a guy you basically slept with, why are you not informing him??? Disgusting
-main couple starts dating too soon, gets boring
-main couple is forgotten about, second couple is the focus
-second couple: 19y/o x 30y/o. Why are you, a man in your thirties, dating a teenager? Disgusting again
-smut got boring, there was too much of it