Im venting so don't read it if you dont want to know why. Also, I'm dropping this story!!
First, fk that doctor and ugly ass guide. No matter what the reason or backstory fk it!! This story give me blood pressure, and it feel so mess up!
The beginning of the story was good with the introduction of mc and ml, but all of a sudden it turn into a 180 degree to whatever no story plot and mc and ml personality. It just jump all over around, or just fast paced to nothing.
Like, first mc look like he have a strong personality, and then all of a sudden he like ml and is weak, and dumb and way to nice. Like seriously the part when he could just have let ml kill the doctor and the guide. Like bruhhh, the guide kill that other esper guide and is about to steal ml. And it was already said that the esper want to kill the guide and hate him bc of what he did but could not due to his power, so who care if he doesn't have a guide. The center could just try to fix that. And then mc be like, jdjdndn dont kil him jjdkdldk blah blah. Fk dumb（￣へ￣）
I thought ml have a thing with that guide basically on the flashback, and he didn't said anything to mc about it! Also, idk but it kind of dont make sense, like he act like he doesn't know the guide at all, like they're strangers. Which idc, but it just doesn't connect to the story or make sense, like idk how to explain the feeling but it is like you see a new character just appear yk.
Also, that girl with the lab coat, is so annoying. Like she just see mc and ml like a test subject.
The story doesn't make sense at all. Like the part, all of a sudden mc and ml going out and mc acting like ml confess to him to go out when it was mc who did it first but it switch to ml being the one who asks first. OK.... and then mc confess again to ml bc he lost his memory. Ok...
I said this already, but gonna said it again. Im so mad at mc for not letting ml kill the guide and doctor bc he to nice, blah blah. Now, there more drama or problems. The story feel rush too.
The only good thing I like about this is ml liking mc and still does even tho he lost his memory and doesn't fall for that nasty guide n protect mc. And I pity the esper guy and how his guide got kill. The guy with the lab coat is cool, he smart plus his guide. I like mc too, but not when he to nice and doesn't speak up like telling ml that he like him or at least tell him he doesn't want ml to be taken by that guide. I think this would have been a good story if mc is just a little smarter and if the story is not so rush. (〜Z△Z)~zzz
Im venting so don't read it if you dont want to know why. Also, I'm dropping this story!!
First, fk that doctor and ugly ass guide. No matter what the reason or backstory fk it!! This story give me blood pressure, and it feel so mess up!
The beginning of the story was good with the introduction of mc and ml, but all of a sudden it turn into a 180 degree to whatever no story plot and mc and ml personality. It just jump all over around, or just fast paced to nothing.
Like, first mc look like he have a strong personality, and then all of a sudden he like ml and is weak, and dumb and way to nice. Like seriously the part when he could just have let ml kill the doctor and the guide. Like bruhhh, the guide kill that other esper guide and is about to steal ml. And it was already said that the esper want to kill the guide and hate him bc of what he did but could not due to his power, so who care if he doesn't have a guide. The center could just try to fix that. And then mc be like, jdjdndn dont kil him jjdkdldk blah blah. Fk dumb（￣へ￣）
I thought ml have a thing with that guide basically on the flashback, and he didn't said anything to mc about it! Also, idk but it kind of dont make sense, like he act like he doesn't know the guide at all, like they're strangers. Which idc, but it just doesn't connect to the story or make sense, like idk how to explain the feeling but it is like you see a new character just appear yk.
Also, that girl with the lab coat, is so annoying. Like she just see mc and ml like a test subject.
The story doesn't make sense at all. Like the part, all of a sudden mc and ml going out and mc acting like ml confess to him to go out when it was mc who did it first but it switch to ml being the one who asks first. OK.... and then mc confess again to ml bc he lost his memory. Ok...
I said this already, but gonna said it again. Im so mad at mc for not letting ml kill the guide and doctor bc he to nice, blah blah. Now, there more drama or problems. The story feel rush too.
The only good thing I like about this is ml liking mc and still does even tho he lost his memory and doesn't fall for that nasty guide n protect mc. And I pity the esper guy and how his guide got kill. The guy with the lab coat is cool, he smart plus his guide. I like mc too, but not when he to nice and doesn't speak up like telling ml that he like him or at least tell him he doesn't want ml to be taken by that guide. I think this would have been a good story if mc is just a little smarter and if the story is not so rush. (〜Z△Z)~zzz