A pretty solid read, but—

Nobody June 29, 2025 11:28 pm

The whole issue with Sohan’s dad could’ve been a lot shorter. I think the conflict took too many unnecessary chapters to be resolved when there was a more interesting story to be had.
His dad could go to hell and should not have given so much spotlight.

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    Lolitsme July 8, 2025 11:06 pm

    For a second I thought he was gonna get a redemption arc when he hit ML with the golf stick because ML said MC will be better off without a dad like him. But he didn’t :/ Sucks for him