I assume Cheong hyeon came back to Taehwa because, before dying in their 1st life, he learned of everything that Taehwa did for him=killing Mr. Kim and dying in the process, beating up his pedo piano teacher in high school (which ruined his boxing career and sent him to juvenile prison), later having the teacher killed, and leaving all his assets to him after dying. He probably realized Taehwa did it all out of love, so in their 2nd life Cheong hyeon wanted to understand him better.
Still, I think the author needs to show that Cheong hyeon felt something for Taehwa in their 1st life. Because after all the rape and abuse, it’s hard to believe he’d choose to meet him again even after learning of his good deeds.
The premise is actually good, but it feels lacking. While both the mc and ml have good backstories, they lack emotional connection. There's a sense of disconnect, not just between the leads, but with the supporting characters too. For example, the two office employees (Taehwa's men) seem underutilized and we (readers) won't feel much if they die next chapter.
I assume Cheong hyeon came back to Taehwa because, before dying in their 1st life, he learned of everything that Taehwa did for him=killing Mr. Kim and dying in the process, beating up his pedo piano teacher in high school (which ruined his boxing career and sent him to juvenile prison), later having the teacher killed, and leaving all his assets to him after dying. He probably realized Taehwa did it all out of love, so in their 2nd life Cheong hyeon wanted to understand him better.
Still, I think the author needs to show that Cheong hyeon felt something for Taehwa in their 1st life. Because after all the rape and abuse, it’s hard to believe he’d choose to meet him again even after learning of his good deeds.
The premise is actually good, but it feels lacking. While both the mc and ml have good backstories, they lack emotional connection. There's a sense of disconnect, not just between the leads, but with the supporting characters too. For example, the two office employees (Taehwa's men) seem underutilized and we (readers) won't feel much if they die next chapter.
Hopefully, it improves.