this had potential but the pacing is too fast, jayden was in this other country for what, like a few weeks? and his ptsd and grief and guilt are magically so improved?? also wtf is with daniel, so unnecessary as a character, as a plot device...lastly, i genuinely thought jayden had just flown cross-country in the US until someone said he "left the states" and then i was very distracted trying to figure out in what not-american country they play american football with proper teams and coaches??? girl what. girl WHERE
this had potential but the pacing is too fast, jayden was in this other country for what, like a few weeks? and his ptsd and grief and guilt are magically so improved?? also wtf is with daniel, so unnecessary as a character, as a plot device...lastly, i genuinely thought jayden had just flown cross-country in the US until someone said he "left the states" and then i was very distracted trying to figure out in what not-american country they play american football with proper teams and coaches??? girl what. girl WHERE