This is going to be controversial but, although this by FAR my favorite omegaverse couple, I’m really disappointed in the plot. I was initially excited that the pregnancy was a big plot point, but I didn’t think it would be the only one. I thought there was going to be a revolution and a lot more intrigue like in King’s Maker, but all that gets left by the wayside. The ending feels rushed. This happened in Blood Link too. There was so much interesting world building only for it to turn into a slice of life story, complete with the vampire worried about getting fat. Listen, I love character driven stories as much as the next person, but then start the story with that expectation instead of making it seem like this was gonna be more Game of Thrones-ish. It’s disappointing. There needs to be a balance between plot and character development and I feel like this story needs 30-40 more chapters to hit that balance. I still give it 4 stars bc this couple is THE BEST. Just wish the plot was better.
This is going to be controversial but, although this by FAR my favorite omegaverse couple, I’m really disappointed in the plot. I was initially excited that the pregnancy was a big plot point, but I didn’t think it would be the only one. I thought there was going to be a revolution and a lot more intrigue like in King’s Maker, but all that gets left by the wayside. The ending feels rushed.
This happened in Blood Link too. There was so much interesting world building only for it to turn into a slice of life story, complete with the vampire worried about getting fat.
Listen, I love character driven stories as much as the next person, but then start the story with that expectation instead of making it seem like this was gonna be more Game of Thrones-ish. It’s disappointing. There needs to be a balance between plot and character development and I feel like this story needs 30-40 more chapters to hit that balance.
I still give it 4 stars bc this couple is THE BEST. Just wish the plot was better.