I'm surprised this has such a high rating. Storyline is poorly written, dialogue is even w...

Yuki9597 July 6, 2025 8:57 am

I'm surprised this has such a high rating. Storyline is poorly written, dialogue is even worse and the smut doesnt even save it imo. I kept waiting for it to get better since everyone in the comments seemed to enjoy it but it only got more boring :(

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    ksweets July 17, 2025 1:01 am

    i agree with this, it has so much potential in the beginning and they could’ve delved deeper into the character’s background. like how they chose the uke as the surrogate, why they tolerate the seme being violent around his family, and that kind of stuff. also feel like they just randomly add omegaverse so they can add a baby TvT