Ew, I hate this bad writing gimmick

Octavia34 July 7, 2025 10:20 am

Truthfully the story hasn't been bad so far. At the very least there's no rape.... The bar is so low.
It's not a particularly great story imo, but then again in only 36 chapters in.
Yet here is where we are introduced to an overly used sign of poor writing skills. The introduction of a new character just to info dump on the MLs "tragic" past.
Wish the authors would stop using this gimmick.
It just really drove home that so far, the story isn't that
compelling. Just the same as the reason for someone having any type of unusual kink (in this case a form of exhibitionism) is always caused by some type trauma. Lord forbid anyone just naturally have non-vanilla kinks. Nooo, those can ONLY happen because of something bad happened in their past ....
It's not bad, but so far can't really understand the 9.1 rating.

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