I really like this but

Zuzu July 7, 2025 4:48 pm

I also don’t. It’s just so long-winded that it feels unnecessary and stalling. Idk.

Responses
    feh July 7, 2025 6:31 pm

    yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. there's like no impact.

    akane006 July 7, 2025 7:41 pm
    yeah the pacing is unnecessarily slow and it could have had some parts which were a lot more concise- like i get needing to change pacing based on the part but if it's slow throughout then it's just boring. the... feh

    I agree with both of you.