at first i thought this was going to be cute, but chapter 6 was just awful, and im glad im not the only one who felt that way. that one chapter completely set me off from the rest of this short “story”, if i can even call it that. Besides chapter 6, i felt like this was just boring, it felt more like porn than story, and i wish that was more obvious before getting into the story, because i definitely expected more, and now im left disappointed, disturbed, and disgusted…so there’s that! like i genuinely cannot see why this has such high ranking on here
at first i thought this was going to be cute, but chapter 6 was just awful, and im glad im not the only one who felt that way. that one chapter completely set me off from the rest of this short “story”, if i can even call it that. Besides chapter 6, i felt like this was just boring, it felt more like porn than story, and i wish that was more obvious before getting into the story, because i definitely expected more, and now im left disappointed, disturbed, and disgusted…so there’s that! like i genuinely cannot see why this has such high ranking on here