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I think the issue is that none of us in the comments are military masterminds and even we see how stupid these actual military masterminds are acting, lol
This isn't some mrm smut, it's an actual story that also has smut and it's weird to say that people shouldn't have standards for a story. I would not be nearly as interested or commenting on this if it didn't have a compelling story, you probably wouldn't either.
Yall we cant go into these military / spy ect stories thinking they really gonna be military masterminds its all for the plot lol this is bl not the art of war