Is this how ADHD looks like?

dasgodfather July 10, 2025 3:33 am

First of all, there are a LOT of random rambling thoughts.. That's why we managed to get only 1 plot per chapter.. Luckily, I really love Arwin and Latte. Just that, there is too much comedic panels, those were kind of distracting from the main plot.
Ch 1- 30.. Danger zone of dropping as story was heavily centered on Ibelin with Latte being the sidekick. Usually, I'm on the sideline watching some random MC love story. Then, it felt like I'm on the sideline watching another sideline watching MC love story. Kind of frustrating to be perfectly honest.
Ch 30-100.. Slowly focused on Latte only..
Ch 100-130...Got better! Author flipped narrative to be from Arwin's and Ibelin's POVs. Latte finally stopped herself from being a side character only. Love yourself sis. Glad that Arwin fell in love with Latte.

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