That's another critique I have - if dude is such a talented killer why did he let himself get raped instead of immediately killing his ass?? Smiling like he was plotting that shit all along but like?? You could have just killed him immediately like you usually do - that's one of the only times he waited to kill someone and I guess it was for the "plot" (we needed the big reveal that he wasn't just some weak traumatized child) but it was so poorly executed. Anyways, good choice on dropping this 'cause you're not missing out on anything
You get it so muchhh omfg, and thank you for validating my choice cause it really was a shame... I liked the artstyle alot Ig im just the type of person to drop stories quickly if "big events" are rushed, 'cause to me it just reflects the overall quality of the story Overall, hope you find some better stories yourself lols
Bro what literally dropping 1st chapter... I can already tell how shallow the plot is, and I dont think I got patience enough to wait for it to get better. Grape in the very first chapter on page THIRTEEN is crazy too