The plot is good but a bit too fast paced, I feel like the couple doesn't have much of a c...

Milie-pede July 12, 2025 2:31 pm

The plot is good but a bit too fast paced, I feel like the couple doesn't have much of a chemistry al though ml is cute when his protective I feel like mc was just confused the whole time and just accepted that he's having sex with the guy. The hs girl however has it rough, having to save the world at a very very young age and being together with a considerably older guy is kinda concerning, and I just feel bad that the story didn't end with hs girl being happy and going home. Overall I wish this had like a hundred chapters cause I will eat that whole thing up. This had serious potential with the storyline and world building, but it's far too short.

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    mmkay July 12, 2025 3:57 pm

    couldnt agree more┐(´(エ)`)┌