Responses
I did feel like they did mess up with the pacing and fleshing out some parts but it was a cute story in the end still. I wish the author spend more time putting obstacles between their bond for it to seem like their relationship was that much more put together and real. But of well, I feel like it's hard to expect really good stories sometimes
This is the type of wholesome story that people who dislike good plot development love I guess? It was a cute story to read when there’s nothing else to read but it’s boring. This is when you write a trope and not a plot. The trope is omegaverse. Therese sex and a baby. That’s it. There was no room for development or improvement because the characters immediately talked things out. This is why most author don’t use communication when writing stories. Because they’re boring like this and it doesn’t give room for any kind of plot development. Definitely the type of story most moralists would enjoy though since there’s nothing to marinate and talk about.