Bro I don’t usually comment on bad writing because I’m not a writer but this is just so in your face obvious. first all the characters feel so surface level, not a lick of depth and you could say it’s because it’s short but I’ve read a lot of stuff that has really good character and only like 3 chapters. next the mc omega is sooo unnatural like he trust the two alphas so fucking fast I thought I missed a chapter, and that goes against his whole character that they were trying set up(like the alpha hating omega that’s been done wrong by soo many alphas). The twins are so weird all they did was contradict themselves and act “better then” to the point I was unsure if we were supposed to like them or not because I definitely didn’t. They literally saved him from sexual assault just to sexually assault him??? Lastly this whole thing just felt incestey. It’s like the author wrote a weird incest story and decided “hrmm let me add a main character that these incest freaks can tournament!” Overall the only thing going for this is tht the art is pretty.
Bro I don’t usually comment on bad writing because I’m not a writer but this is just so in your face obvious. first all the characters feel so surface level, not a lick of depth and you could say it’s because it’s short but I’ve read a lot of stuff that has really good character and only like 3 chapters. next the mc omega is sooo unnatural like he trust the two alphas so fucking fast I thought I missed a chapter, and that goes against his whole character that they were trying set up(like the alpha hating omega that’s been done wrong by soo many alphas). The twins are so weird all they did was contradict themselves and act “better then” to the point I was unsure if we were supposed to like them or not because I definitely didn’t. They literally saved him from sexual assault just to sexually assault him??? Lastly this whole thing just felt incestey. It’s like the author wrote a weird incest story and decided “hrmm let me add a main character that these incest freaks can tournament!” Overall the only thing going for this is tht the art is pretty.