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100% agree
one of the reasons this type of story really pisses me off is that the fuckery arc is like 100x longer than the find out arc and it makes it feel so unsatisfying
one that did it pretty well actually was Struggle bc holy shit did the alpha suffer, and his redemption actually felt earned
Unpopular opinion. The chasing arc (ML) should be as long as the Suffering Arc (MC) cause how in the world is that fair??? Most of the time the Mc suffers till 200 chapter and he just chases u for like 1-5 chapters lmao, I want them on their knees, crying, dishevelled hair, out of breath, heart palpating, chest hurting, tears streaming, choking on their words, their worlds falling apart type of chasing and begging tf