This started off great. It was very funny and then it started to drag after they had sex the first time. Overall, I thought it was fine but I won't miss the sex scenes at all. This is one of the few yaois where the sex was a low point and where the guys look better with clothes on.
What confused me was how every single person in this story was RIPPED AF even the old fucking men T_T
But yeah, the sex was off putting, they could have nixed it completely or wrote it differently. The story itself is interesting, it didn’t really need those sex scenes
What confused me was how every single person in this story was RIPPED AF even the old fucking men T_T But yeah, the sex was off putting, they could have nixed it completely or wrote it differently. The story i... anake_hg
Yeah I love muscles, but it was excessive. I also would have been fine with no sex scenes and more story. But I've read much worse yaois.
This started off great. It was very funny and then it started to drag after they had sex the first time. Overall, I thought it was fine but I won't miss the sex scenes at all. This is one of the few yaois where the sex was a low point and where the guys look better with clothes on.