i shouldn’t have expected much from a smut anyways but the ending was still disappointing. story is 4/10. get ready for a yap session, otherwise scroll.
first off, the smut wasn’t even that good. it was mediocre at best. i do like the dynamic and that’s the only reason i look at it in a positive light. otherwise the explicit scenes were absolute shit.
charlotte is a little deranged and she’s ugly. hated those fuck ass bangs but when it comes to femdom stories, i’d eat dog shit if it was served to me. i’m so desperate for a good femdom story and this one unfortunately disappointed me as well.
obviously this story was never meant to be taken seriously but as a reader, i’ll still critique it. i still don’t understand how tf dale fell in love. i guess homie is just a master masochist. he’d fall in love with a dildo if it fucked his ass hard enough. i don’t know how charlotte fell in love either. i guess if her dog turned into a human, she would’ve fucked it too.
i can’t help but mourn what could’ve been a good femdom like if they wanted to go the romance route, it would’ve been so nice to see the development from dale fulfilling his duty to his conflict with falling in love with charlotte. it kinda just felt like someone turned off the lights and when they turned back on, suddenly both dale and charlotte were in love. also not to mention the shit ass ending with the marriage done in like two panels and then the random time skip such a waste
i wouldn’t even recommend this to someone who wants to read it for the smut. skip
i shouldn’t have expected much from a smut anyways but the ending was still disappointing. story is 4/10. get ready for a yap session, otherwise scroll.
first off, the smut wasn’t even that good. it was mediocre at best. i do like the dynamic and that’s the only reason i look at it in a positive light. otherwise the explicit scenes were absolute shit.
charlotte is a little deranged and she’s ugly. hated those fuck ass bangs but when it comes to femdom stories, i’d eat dog shit if it was served to me. i’m so desperate for a good femdom story and this one unfortunately disappointed me as well.
obviously this story was never meant to be taken seriously but as a reader, i’ll still critique it. i still don’t understand how tf dale fell in love. i guess homie is just a master masochist. he’d fall in love with a dildo if it fucked his ass hard enough. i don’t know how charlotte fell in love either. i guess if her dog turned into a human, she would’ve fucked it too.
i can’t help but mourn what could’ve been a good femdom like if they wanted to go the romance route, it would’ve been so nice to see the development from dale fulfilling his duty to his conflict with falling in love with charlotte. it kinda just felt like someone turned off the lights and when they turned back on, suddenly both dale and charlotte were in love. also not to mention the shit ass ending with the marriage done in like two panels and then the random time skip such a waste
i wouldn’t even recommend this to someone who wants to read it for the smut. skip