The story had many things wrong and rushed with it, but this seems to usually happen with these types of short, romance stories. However, I did personally enjoy and love their relationship & kinda wished it centered more on them. As I love the whole premise of the notebook and the mom's last message was bittersweet. I also wish we saw them having a family and not her family at the end (they really deserved worse) Still I enjoyed this hot mess & wanted more, but better writing.
The story had many things wrong and rushed with it, but this seems to usually happen with these types of short, romance stories. However, I did personally enjoy and love their relationship & kinda wished it centered more on them. As I love the whole premise of the notebook and the mom's last message was bittersweet. I also wish we saw them having a family and not her family at the end (they really deserved worse) Still I enjoyed this hot mess & wanted more, but better writing.