Terrible writing

Daggerlove July 21, 2025 11:16 am

Whoever wrote this really needs to read more. This is the worst store I've ever read. Everything was all over the place and there was way to much reading that lead to nothing. Go right a book if you can't write a comic. The story was just boring to begin with and both characters have absolutely no personality.

Responses
    576Q August 19, 2025 4:23 am

    I think you need to read more mangas……… calling them comics is crazy work but also it’s a fan translation, some things don’t make sense bc of translation issues and if you read more mangas you’ll start to understand the nuances between English and Japanese translations… also this story was just cute