first of all i must preface : i read this till the 89 chp, just came to a point where ik where stuff is leading to and i just stop reading cus it's getting to me lmao. also read my whole topic first before casting your judgements. i have my reasons for my opinion.
what irked me in this story :
-the reincarnation/transmigation plot line has no reason to exist. and the fact that it was emphasised that she was mentally 29 y/o aware and fell in love with a 10y/o boy is concerning. even more so bc the story would have made sense even if she wasn't reincarnated/transmigated. (but i can just chose to forget that fact and read alibg anyway, infact i did bc of the great art)
-the constant weird choices and decisions made by MC and ML which then in turn cause them bigger trouble. for this i think it's because it's better for the story drama wise? bc some of their decision : going to the house where the MC's family were holding a pregnant women hostage alone, ML choosing to stay silent abt him gaining his memories back (his reasoning was genuinely weak lol and he hurts his wife in the process), MC choosing to play this "let's hide for a week in the manor's saferoom" (genuinely why lol , reasoning author gave was weak af like damn), and some other minor ones when they were in the kids arc.
-MC constantly being made into this "i can't get hurt/sad now, i have goals to complete" person like genuinely most of the conflicts in this story, MC is constantly putting her feelings in the backseat, always putting ML's on the center of her every move genuinely just drives me personally insane lol. sure there's beauty in that kinda love ig but i draw the line at a pregnant woman, having to go out of her way to defend her and her husband's honor in secrecy while her husband, who was pretending to still lost his memories, waited it out while his wife's name and dignity was dragged through the mud by their enemy. i get it, he has a plan or wtv, but damn personally, most of his reasonings are weak. and things can be done in much efficient ways. but throughout all this and even after overcoming all that, you're telling me she doesn't even feel a little upset at him? not even a little? damn what an angel this writing made her out to be. personally this just made her character so small in my eyes, she's such a strong woman in the start of the story, that doesn't mean having extreme emotions portrayed will make her any weaker, in fact it would strengthen her character even more. she should be mad actually, for both her sake and her child's sake, for both of their lives were at stake because of the ML's choices.
okay that's all, sorry for the long yap, there must be lots of typos (eng isn't my first language ) , hope you can still understand what I'm getting at. and I'm by no means attacking those who enjoy the story, just wanna put my thoughts out there.
first of all i must preface : i read this till the 89 chp, just came to a point where ik where stuff is leading to and i just stop reading cus it's getting to me lmao. also read my whole topic first before casting your judgements. i have my reasons for my opinion.
what irked me in this story :
-the reincarnation/transmigation plot line has no reason to exist. and the fact that it was emphasised that she was mentally 29 y/o aware and fell in love with a 10y/o boy is concerning. even more so bc the story would have made sense even if she wasn't reincarnated/transmigated. (but i can just chose to forget that fact and read alibg anyway, infact i did bc of the great art)
-the constant weird choices and decisions made by MC and ML which then in turn cause them bigger trouble. for this i think it's because it's better for the story drama wise? bc some of their decision : going to the house where the MC's family were holding a pregnant women hostage alone, ML choosing to stay silent abt him gaining his memories back (his reasoning was genuinely weak lol and he hurts his wife in the process), MC choosing to play this "let's hide for a week in the manor's saferoom" (genuinely why lol , reasoning author gave was weak af like damn), and some other minor ones when they were in the kids arc.
-MC constantly being made into this "i can't get hurt/sad now, i have goals to complete" person like genuinely most of the conflicts in this story, MC is constantly putting her feelings in the backseat, always putting ML's on the center of her every move genuinely just drives me personally insane lol. sure there's beauty in that kinda love ig but i draw the line at a pregnant woman, having to go out of her way to defend her and her husband's honor in secrecy while her husband, who was pretending to still lost his memories, waited it out while his wife's name and dignity was dragged through the mud by their enemy. i get it, he has a plan or wtv, but damn personally, most of his reasonings are weak. and things can be done in much efficient ways. but throughout all this and even after overcoming all that, you're telling me she doesn't even feel a little upset at him? not even a little? damn what an angel this writing made her out to be. personally this just made her character so small in my eyes, she's such a strong woman in the start of the story, that doesn't mean having extreme emotions portrayed will make her any weaker, in fact it would strengthen her character even more. she should be mad actually, for both her sake and her child's sake, for both of their lives were at stake because of the ML's choices.
okay that's all, sorry for the long yap, there must be lots of typos (eng isn't my first language ) , hope you can still understand what I'm getting at. and I'm by no means attacking those who enjoy the story, just wanna put my thoughts out there.