It was good until it wasn't? I feel like the transitions between the next plot devices was...

xoy July 23, 2025 7:49 am

It was good until it wasn't? I feel like the transitions between the next plot devices was very lousy. So many plot bombs dropped chapter after chapter after chapter in the later part of the story. It almost felt rushed or the author just didn't how to create a climax and the settlement of everything. Art is great, but a lot of things were so out of place.

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    viy July 23, 2025 4:01 pm

    it WAS good, just poorly executed. author and artist were rushing for sure.