For me at least yes haha honestly with a bit more communication, everything could have been solved sooner XD art is good and overall a good read~
Idk if others think so as well, but I kinda wished a more steady and mature partner for Jiwan… Yes Taeyang is younger but he seems too idealistic and childish in some parts. With what Jiwan has gone through, I would have loved more understanding and not just promises like „I can tell others […] That’s how much I like you“ or smth (sorry forgot the phrasing), like NO life is not that easy that love is all you need!! (I haven’t been in love but from what I’ve seen in the world, that’s the conclusion I’ve come to…) Especially seeing how his mother treated Jiwan (I understand the worry of an older person/child kissing their baby boy (which totally didn’t happen) but they seem to be childhood friends so the mom should know what kind of person Jiwan is, if she’s worried his “illness” will be “transmitted” then that’s even more maddening) like both of them don’t seem to have supportive parents and they don’t seem to be the kind that easily are willing to change… Anyways what I mean is, I wish for Jiwan someone who has a plan and can calm his nerves and worries, not just smile and laugh… optimism is good, but it’s not everything…
I feel like Jiwans story is reality, and Taeyang is living in a different kind of world, and maybe Jiwan does need it…
Ok all in all I’m just writing this probably bc I’m not satisfied with this Top hahhaha I wish there was someone better for Jiwan ahhhhh I love my bottoms so much :( they deserve the world
For me at least yes haha honestly with a bit more communication, everything could have been solved sooner XD art is good and overall a good read~
Idk if others think so as well, but I kinda wished a more steady and mature partner for Jiwan… Yes Taeyang is younger but he seems too idealistic and childish in some parts. With what Jiwan has gone through, I would have loved more understanding and not just promises like „I can tell others […] That’s how much I like you“ or smth (sorry forgot the phrasing), like NO life is not that easy that love is all you need!! (I haven’t been in love but from what I’ve seen in the world, that’s the conclusion I’ve come to…)
Especially seeing how his mother treated Jiwan (I understand the worry of an older person/child kissing their baby boy (which totally didn’t happen) but they seem to be childhood friends so the mom should know what kind of person Jiwan is, if she’s worried his “illness” will be “transmitted” then that’s even more maddening) like both of them don’t seem to have supportive parents and they don’t seem to be the kind that easily are willing to change…
Anyways what I mean is, I wish for Jiwan someone who has a plan and can calm his nerves and worries, not just smile and laugh… optimism is good, but it’s not everything…
I feel like Jiwans story is reality, and Taeyang is living in a different kind of world, and maybe Jiwan does need it…
Ok all in all I’m just writing this probably bc I’m not satisfied with this Top hahhaha I wish there was someone better for Jiwan ahhhhh I love my bottoms so much :( they deserve the world