I think a lot of these characters could’ve been left out . I understand not wanting to bore readers but when you add so many characters, sometimes those monologues and fleshed out chapters are needed. Otherwise you end up with a product that seems deep on the outside but is actually quite affectatious and has just left everyone a bit confused. That being said I really enjoyed the last chapter and felt the parallel between Brett giving his brother a dead bird and getting revenge for Hayden was portrayed amazingly.
I think a lot of these characters could’ve been left out . I understand not wanting to bore readers but when you add so many characters, sometimes those monologues and fleshed out chapters are needed. Otherwise you end up with a product that seems deep on the outside but is actually quite affectatious and has just left everyone a bit confused. That being said I really enjoyed the last chapter and felt the parallel between Brett giving his brother a dead bird and getting revenge for Hayden was portrayed amazingly.