i feel like

Pee July 25, 2025 1:14 pm

people always talk about the character development but i feel theres been little to none... either this is an extremely long slow burn or just a bit lacking in that department, i really hope its coming soon and he better be like taeju or better because this backstory made me question his actions even more.. Why would this trauma make him act so coldly and disrespectful to others and Dan? Like dude you have been in poverty before and yet you still used Dan's poverty to your advantage? He was so lucky he was taken in so kindly and not used like Dan

(Also im not at all one of those anti Jinx haters dont attack me haha i just wish the characters had a little more depth, especially with character development, even Dan is still the small person he was before

Responses
    Asaki Long July 25, 2025 2:53 pm

    You nailed it! There're holes everywhere and that's a shame for such good art We can see the frustration in the amount of comments trying to understand or explain the emptiness.

    Private Poopenfarten July 25, 2025 3:54 pm

    Girl let’s just be honest this story is ass mingwa did not polish her writing chops between bj Alex in this

    Pee July 27, 2025 3:59 am
    You nailed it! There're holes everywhere and that's a shame for such good art We can see the frustration in the amount of comments trying to understand or explain the emptiness. Asaki Long

    Ah im so glad im not the only one who feels this way... I was scared i'd be attacked by fans lol

    Pee July 27, 2025 4:01 am
    Girl let’s just be honest this story is ass mingwa did not polish her writing chops between bj Alex in this Private Poopenfarten

    I did kind of feel like this was a copy of BJ alex except more abusive in some way! I sort of see a vision of how the characters could've been with better writing and i cant help but feel disappointed... the base plot is sort of similar with waterside night in a way and waterside night was so much better in my opinion