womp womp

Hoshi July 25, 2025 2:34 pm

It's a bit hard to follow all the side plots under the main umbrella. There's Alice and Ed, Alice and Aaron, Aaron and Durua/Aurora, then Nocton and Alice, and Nocton and Durua/Aurora, not to mention we have all these additionalside characters that have their stories shared as well. From reading it till chap 50, I can understand the concept they were going for, but it's all too much in just the beginning of the Manhwa. There are too many character storylines in just the beginning, which makes it easy to drop from its complexity. If you enjoy multi-thickening plots, then maybe you'd enjoy this, but this is definitely a story for a more honed section of developed literature. There are occasional plot holes, but theyre minor so it doesnt take away from the story, and some get fixed further into it. But it's definitely too complex for the first 50 chapters.
I would also like to HEAVILY EXPRESS there are farrr too many misunderstandings that could be cleared up within a single word. Reading through the first little portion, its hard for me to continue because I'm under the impression everything is just going to be misunderstood anyway. Valrose does eventually start receiving some sense to think further into things, but all the characters are constantly avoiding subjects to clear things up, or even hinder their own ability to clear mistakes up, and her sense of clarity just started happening close to chap. 48. I'm not the type to stop a story mid-way, regardless on how bad it is, but when I'm at chap. 150, I will be back upon further review lol

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