A witness is most likely an unreliable narrator and shouldn’t be depended upon especially for a case this severe. A child witness (6 yo at that), traumatized is even more unreliable. Police should’ve gone after paper trail or other tangible evidence, hard evidence is much better than a witness. Didn’t he even consider that the police or the government or someone bigger or higher up could be involved? Considering they couldn’t seem to find anything to push the case through, 24 people dead there has got to be some sort of evidence or connection to be had.
And ML is not faultless here that is a minor he’s watching bathe and he’s kissing. He’s definitely groomed. ML’s kindness is not without a hidden agenda, may it be lust or to hide something.
All in all this is interesting. Got me commenting at least 40 words.
A witness is most likely an unreliable narrator and shouldn’t be depended upon especially for a case this severe. A child witness (6 yo at that), traumatized is even more unreliable. Police should’ve gone after paper trail or other tangible evidence, hard evidence is much better than a witness. Didn’t he even consider that the police or the government or someone bigger or higher up could be involved? Considering they couldn’t seem to find anything to push the case through, 24 people dead there has got to be some sort of evidence or connection to be had.
And ML is not faultless here that is a minor he’s watching bathe and he’s kissing. He’s definitely groomed. ML’s kindness is not without a hidden agenda, may it be lust or to hide something.
All in all this is interesting. Got me commenting at least 40 words.