This seems pretty interesting and the art is great, but... I'm confused about the monikers of the "sinful angels." Are they, like, proud of them...? Or rather, if they're literally playing up these baselevel sins, wtf did Misora's dad have to do to be considered beyond redemption? Yikes. No one else's wings darkened, too, despite the open displayal of their sins, so I wonder if Misora really is "worse" than any of them or if it's like, genetics. There's a lot happening here for a first chapter, so it's a bit messy... but the concept really IS interesting. I hope they turn it down for the next chapters and expand the world building slowly.
This seems pretty interesting and the art is great, but... I'm confused about the monikers of the "sinful angels." Are they, like, proud of them...? Or rather, if they're literally playing up these baselevel sins, wtf did Misora's dad have to do to be considered beyond redemption? Yikes. No one else's wings darkened, too, despite the open displayal of their sins, so I wonder if Misora really is "worse" than any of them or if it's like, genetics.
There's a lot happening here for a first chapter, so it's a bit messy... but the concept really IS interesting. I hope they turn it down for the next chapters and expand the world building slowly.
Also, can't wait to see Pride