y'all ?? i remember a long while back i began this, then dropped it, and recently today i rediscovered is and was happy to see it was done so i could binge. restarting it i was like wow? this is actually pretty cute and decent, why did i drop this in the first place?
got halfway and it dawned upon me... this shit was ass
how fucking frustrating ?? we never got to hear or learn about the ml's personal life beyond a few tidbits here and there. it gen felt like the dude didn't exist beyond the mc, so his actions Did Not make sense to me at all. i couldn't believe when i got to the end and there was still NO discussion about the ml's family/personal life like ?? like what happened to introspection??
also, what the fuck happened to the sister??? wasn't like a huge plot point that the mc has major trauma related to women bc of his sister, i thought we'd dive deeper into that beyond like 3 chapters. the story introduced her saying that she even took the mc's bff so i thought we would get learn more but she shows up for a sec, ml intimidates her and then everything is all honky dory.
and the mc's friend who has a huge hate boner towards the ml? the revelation that everyone knew the mc was bluffing about being a relationship guru?
all these major plot points felt like balloons that were going to have an exciting pop, but then the author mismanaged/forgot about them so they ended up just deflating on their own.
ugh, i can't even fully detest the story bc they were cute together if you ignored literally everything else and the art was good. that's what makes this even more harrowing all that wasted potential
y'all ?? i remember a long while back i began this, then dropped it, and recently today i rediscovered is and was happy to see it was done so i could binge. restarting it i was like wow? this is actually pretty cute and decent, why did i drop this in the first place?
got halfway and it dawned upon me... this shit was ass
how fucking frustrating ?? we never got to hear or learn about the ml's personal life beyond a few tidbits here and there. it gen felt like the dude didn't exist beyond the mc, so his actions Did Not make sense to me at all. i couldn't believe when i got to the end and there was still NO discussion about the ml's family/personal life like ?? like what happened to introspection??
also, what the fuck happened to the sister??? wasn't like a huge plot point that the mc has major trauma related to women bc of his sister, i thought we'd dive deeper into that beyond like 3 chapters. the story introduced her saying that she even took the mc's bff so i thought we would get learn more but she shows up for a sec, ml intimidates her and then everything is all honky dory.
and the mc's friend who has a huge hate boner towards the ml? the revelation that everyone knew the mc was bluffing about being a relationship guru?
all these major plot points felt like balloons that were going to have an exciting pop, but then the author mismanaged/forgot about them so they ended up just deflating on their own.
ugh, i can't even fully detest the story bc they were cute together if you ignored literally everything else and the art was good. that's what makes this even more harrowing all that wasted potential