bruh huh? was this good? sure, it’s pretty good if you focus solely on the plot development of the two leads. However. HOWEVER! you can definitely tell this author went into this initially thinking they’d throw everything at the wall and see what stuck and flesh that aspect out. because there are so many half finished subplot pieces that were just put into and then abandoned halfway that i almost feel like i read 2 different comics.
the TA had cameos as if he’d be apart of this bigger scene that would make him choose between his jealousy and doing the right thing. The “friend” side character had cameos that would lead you to believe if and when they suddenly came to know his friend was also a hybrid, he’d be disgusted and/or retaliate by selling him out. the parents appear and disappear as if by magic when they’re supposedly these worried protective type characters and then the drug plot and the primates attacking the MC plot. all of these things just kind of build and then fizz out like the author just didn’t know what to really focus on.
It could have been so much more interesting but they must have had a cap on chapters cause the end did nt even fill complete.
bruh huh? was this good? sure, it’s pretty good if you focus solely on the plot development of the two leads. However. HOWEVER! you can definitely tell this author went into this initially thinking they’d throw everything at the wall and see what stuck and flesh that aspect out. because there are so many half finished subplot pieces that were just put into and then abandoned halfway that i almost feel like i read 2 different comics.
the TA had cameos as if he’d be apart of this bigger scene that would make him choose between his jealousy and doing the right thing. The “friend” side character had cameos that would lead you to believe if and when they suddenly came to know his friend was also a hybrid, he’d be disgusted and/or retaliate by selling him out. the parents appear and disappear as if by magic when they’re supposedly these worried protective type characters and then the drug plot and the primates attacking the MC plot. all of these things just kind of build and then fizz out like the author just didn’t know what to really focus on.
It could have been so much more interesting but they must have had a cap on chapters cause the end did nt even fill complete.