The story wasn't anything fantastic but after chapter... like 19, it just devolves so much...

Cosmic Gaything July 29, 2025 9:30 pm

The story wasn't anything fantastic but after chapter... like 19, it just devolves so much. The pacing is so much worse. Maybe it was canceled and they had to wrap things up quickly? Or maybe the author just got tired of this. It would make sense, considering that they just stopped trying with the art. The fuck kind of character/story development is this? Introducing completely uncharacteristic love interests in the span of less than a chapter for both Rwanda and the other guy? Excusing everything with some measly flashbacks? Bruh. Whatever semblance of a plot this had has been lost entirely. And the climax of the story was a huge letdown. After all that buildup, they reintroduced his mother only to kill her off, revealed that Clive was his father only to kill him off in like the next chapter, revealed the human experimentation shit earlier on but didn't even follow up, and just... sigh. So many loose ends. What was Clive's motivation, even? He killed off the Baileys to what end? Just so he could sire a kid who might grow up to be a talented killer, or? Such a weak reason if so, and it still doesn't even make sense. And how did he even end up at the head of gang of hitmen? He killed off the original head - okay, but what was the context? And that's not even the half of it. So much left undeveloped, but I'll stop here

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