Cliches...

PmChivas September 1, 2025 4:28 am

This was a good idea that's been poorly executed. It's like the author decided to put every ABO cliche in this story: traumatized omega, pretending to be a beta, SA attempts every day, hating being an Omega, in heat/releasing pheromones all the time, and savior good Alpha. This storyline is so disjointed and unable to follow its own plot from end-to-end. I don't know how this story made it pass an editor as the panels don't flow making it feel like 3 different people were working on this story and none of them talked to each other. Seriously, don't read this trash otherwise you'll end up with whiplash trying to follow the plot.

I was hoping for something better considering the use of "feisty" in the title. I thought it would be an established throuple and sexy hijinks between them with modest drama.

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