I totally get why people might dislike this but honestly I loved it. Not saying it's a masterpiece or anything but...
The suspense was crazy, the writing was good, and while the seme was a psychopath, he was likeable. Instead of a stone faced top who's only an asshole for the sake of being an asshole and a malice to the uke, we got a genuine psychopathic murderer who loved the uke in the only way he knows how.
There was no pointless rape going on in every chapter, mostly dub-con because the situation was fucked, but seme explicitly tells him he can say no and is free to leave, several times, tho the consequences would've been a bit uh... yknow. And dick sizes are somewhat normal sized, can you imagine that? No asses have been destroyed here.
Uke is smart, and watching these two felt a bit like Light vs Kira to some extent, haha. He also didn't just suddenly turn dumb or anything, no he's a smart pretty bean all the way through. Seme is just equally smart But lemme just tell you the police is absolutely useless here, holy moly
I liked the ending. It's kinda what you expected and while they could've chosen a different route that would've also been satisfying I didn't mind the way it ended. It just fit. Seme is a serial killer, and that doesn't change. He doesn't magically get his mental health back and stop in the name of love or something, his character stays true to himself throughout the entire story. But I liked him in a way you usually like good written villains. You don't condone what they do, but you still root for them from time to time.
What I didn't like so much were the sidestories. I know what the author tried to do with the first half, but I think it was totally unnecessary. We did get a bit more insight into their relationship and thoughts, but eh... could've done that without whatever random shitshow the first half was.
All in all it was a really fucked up but enjoyable read, something I can't say often about a toxic story, and even less so about the seme in it.
If I had to describe their love I would say it was beautiful in a very twisted way.
Oh yeah and fuck seme's dad bruh, that man needed Jesus the most
I totally get why people might dislike this but honestly I loved it. Not saying it's a masterpiece or anything but...
The suspense was crazy, the writing was good, and while the seme was a psychopath, he was likeable. Instead of a stone faced top who's only an asshole for the sake of being an asshole and a malice to the uke, we got a genuine psychopathic murderer who loved the uke in the only way he knows how.
There was no pointless rape going on in every chapter, mostly dub-con because the situation was fucked, but seme explicitly tells him he can say no and is free to leave, several times, tho the consequences would've been a bit uh... yknow.
And dick sizes are somewhat normal sized, can you imagine that? No asses have been destroyed here.
Uke is smart, and watching these two felt a bit like Light vs Kira to some extent, haha. He also didn't just suddenly turn dumb or anything, no he's a smart pretty bean all the way through. Seme is just equally smart
But lemme just tell you the police is absolutely useless here, holy moly
I liked the ending. It's kinda what you expected and while they could've chosen a different route that would've also been satisfying I didn't mind the way it ended. It just fit.
Seme is a serial killer, and that doesn't change. He doesn't magically get his mental health back and stop in the name of love or something, his character stays true to himself throughout the entire story. But I liked him in a way you usually like good written villains. You don't condone what they do, but you still root for them from time to time.
What I didn't like so much were the sidestories. I know what the author tried to do with the first half,
but I think it was totally unnecessary. We did get a bit more insight into their relationship and thoughts, but eh... could've done that without whatever random shitshow the first half was.
All in all it was a really fucked up but enjoyable read, something I can't say often about a toxic story, and even less so about the seme in it.
If I had to describe their love I would say it was beautiful in a very twisted way.
Oh yeah and fuck seme's dad bruh, that man needed Jesus the most