It was good and I liked both MCs a lot, but the pacing was way too fast. Everything resol...

Leilei July 31, 2025 12:47 pm

It was good and I liked both MCs a lot, but the pacing was way too fast.
Everything resolved instantly without the slightest build up.

It didn't leave me any time to get invested or really feel anything tbh

This had huge potential had it been longer and more drawn out, but was still a good short read

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