Like!!!! if you're going to have her go back into the realworld you GOTTA explain the mechanics!!!!
And if not!!! DON'T. HAVE. HER. GO. BACK!!!!
Have it that she goes to sleep!!!!! Have it so that the system goes "DON'T" as like a rule or something mysterious!!!!!
YOU COULD LITERALLY STILL HAVETHE BROTHER GO FIND HER AGAIN!
SAY SHE DISAPPEARED AFTER BEING IN THE HOSPITAL WITH THE MASK ON!!!! AND HE LIKE INVESTIGATES OR SOMETHING!!!
OH MY GOD AUTHOR!!!!!
Holy shit I am dead ass inspired to write fanfic to give some sort of reasoning behind this holy shit holy shit!!!!!!
Like I understand that not EVERY story has to explain stuff
but also
WHAT THE FUKC
so like
everyone else just seems them wasting away in comas until they come back?? and she doesn't currently plan on going back so he wont either?!??!
thts so fucked up holy shit
I need more oh my god that was SO rushed!!!!!