I do like this story a lot especially since I’m real into possessive lowkey obsessed tops n cute bottoms that match each others freak BUUTTT if I had to nitpick, I’m not a huge fan that MC has no idea his family or friend supports him being gay. It’s kind of isolating him in a way yk? I feel like they’re treating him like a child who wouldn’t know what to do with himself rather than an adult man and telling him the truth. Which is a really positive kind one, he clearly expresses his loneliness of not being able to express his love about ML to anyone but ML himself and I think that’s sad. Mc has nobody to run to about his relationship struggles that isn’t ML.
I also am not really a fan of how ML went about this argument but then again he’s a freak and clearly MC doesn’t care, maybe is into it as well so I guess that’s that. Mc just comes off as naive and I feel like I wouldn’t worry so much if he had people he knew he could rely on, their relationship really is bowing a thin line between what most could consider the warning signs of an abusive relationship vs just an unconventional one. Idk if that makes sense, I’m not saying ML would get abusive with MC but he just does things like isolate him, makes him feel bad for minuscule things, doesn’t exactly listen to him when he says no on certain things. He just treads a very fine line I think I could ignore if MC had those supportive people in his life, which are there but what’s the use if HE doesn’t know that yknow?
Ok I’m gonna stop rambling sorry that was really long for no reason lol
I do like this story a lot especially since I’m real into possessive lowkey obsessed tops n cute bottoms that match each others freak BUUTTT if I had to nitpick, I’m not a huge fan that MC has no idea his family or friend supports him being gay. It’s kind of isolating him in a way yk? I feel like they’re treating him like a child who wouldn’t know what to do with himself rather than an adult man and telling him the truth. Which is a really positive kind one, he clearly expresses his loneliness of not being able to express his love about ML to anyone but ML himself and I think that’s sad. Mc has nobody to run to about his relationship struggles that isn’t ML.
I also am not really a fan of how ML went about this argument but then again he’s a freak and clearly MC doesn’t care, maybe is into it as well so I guess that’s that. Mc just comes off as naive and I feel like I wouldn’t worry so much if he had people he knew he could rely on, their relationship really is bowing a thin line between what most could consider the warning signs of an abusive relationship vs just an unconventional one. Idk if that makes sense, I’m not saying ML would get abusive with MC but he just does things like isolate him, makes him feel bad for minuscule things, doesn’t exactly listen to him when he says no on certain things. He just treads a very fine line I think I could ignore if MC had those supportive people in his life, which are there but what’s the use if HE doesn’t know that yknow?
Ok I’m gonna stop rambling sorry that was really long for no reason lol