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For the twists in this story, well that's harlequin for you lol, everything happen at the same time and don't always make sense or feel rushed! ╮(￣▽￣)╭ They feel cliche most of the time!!
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For the twists in this story, well that's harlequin for you lol, everything happen at the same time and don't always make sense or feel rushed! ╮(￣▽￣)╭ They feel cliche most of the time!!
1. The art style made it look like the characters were born without their occipital brain and the eyes were to far apart from each other
2. The story had too many plot twistssurprises ( e.g the adoptive parents actually being her grandparents, her dad showing up when they just barely found out about her mother, she getting pregnant on the same day that his son died, the list goes on). This makes the author seem lazy and desperate for an interesting story
3. EVERYTHING WAS TOO CONVENIENT AND THE PLOT WAS RUSHED ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ