Some of the elements of this story really bother me. Ignoring the nonsensical family tree they got going on. It’s like they’re speed running the story. And a lot doesn’t make sense and/or it’s not explained very well.
They keep adding things to make the MC more OP but they’ve added so much so frequently and don’t bother to flesh out the potential each element has.
It’s borderline Mary Stu wish fulfillment territory.
By making everything the MC touches “super rare awesome once in a millennium” it ends up doing the opposite of the intention and making everything seem less impressive.
Like there’s a saying ‘if everyone is special, then no one is special’.
Some of the elements of this story really bother me. Ignoring the nonsensical family tree they got going on. It’s like they’re speed running the story. And a lot doesn’t make sense and/or it’s not explained very well.
They keep adding things to make the MC more OP but they’ve added so much so frequently and don’t bother to flesh out the potential each element has.
It’s borderline Mary Stu wish fulfillment territory.
By making everything the MC touches “super rare awesome once in a millennium” it ends up doing the opposite of the intention and making everything seem less impressive.
Like there’s a saying ‘if everyone is special, then no one is special’.