with the extra chapters' release, i took the chance to re-read the whole thing again and i gotta say with the exception of maybe one or two little things, this is really great. nothing award-winning, but definitely worth a read if you're tired of the usual yaoi rape slop. the isekai premise makes it interesting, the balance between subverse specific topics and relationship building is good so that it never feels boring nor meticulous, the dom not being insufferably dominant made him likeable, the misunderstanding was tolerable and gave their relationship just the right amount of yearning and tension, the resolution was quick, painless and satisfying! the only thing i narrowed my eyes at, and i realize this is nit-picking, is when the dom used commands on the sub without consent to show him how dangerous that can be. i understand why the artist/author handled it this way but it's just something i personally don't like.
with the extra chapters' release, i took the chance to re-read the whole thing again and i gotta say with the exception of maybe one or two little things, this is really great. nothing award-winning, but definitely worth a read if you're tired of the usual yaoi rape slop. the isekai premise makes it interesting, the balance between subverse specific topics and relationship building is good so that it never feels boring nor meticulous, the dom not being insufferably dominant made him likeable, the misunderstanding was tolerable and gave their relationship just the right amount of yearning and tension, the resolution was quick, painless and satisfying! the only thing i narrowed my eyes at, and i realize this is nit-picking, is when the dom used commands on the sub without consent to show him how dangerous that can be. i understand why the artist/author handled it this way but it's just something i personally don't like.