it's super sad because i reaaallly wanted to like it(my friend is a huge fan)- but a lot of it feels like plot armor, not realistic, and the MC's personality doesn't feel natural in some chapters. I think this story is a good start and has unique elements in comparison to the stories that are being developed rn but yeah not my cup of tea.
it's super sad because i reaaallly wanted to like it(my friend is a huge fan)- but a lot of it feels like plot armor, not realistic, and the MC's personality doesn't feel natural in some chapters. I think this story is a good start and has unique elements in comparison to the stories that are being developed rn but yeah not my cup of tea.