What is with the plot right now? (￣∇￣") I kind of see what the author was going for; not uncommon but this route is used by most works of a similar theme. It’s the usual dilemma in such works with the transmigration theme -stay or go back, however, the story and pacing was rough; it felt all over the place.
The art doesn’t help convey seriousness when needed in my opinion and the other expressions felt off? Maybe they’re practicing. I just laugh it off as cringe comedy. Why cringe? Maybe the dialogue has something to do with it, personally. I’m not even as attentive as most readers and I felt this way (￣∇￣")
Nevertheless, I’ll just read this to the end for closure. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
What is with the plot right now? (￣∇￣") I kind of see what the author was going for; not uncommon but this route is used by most works of a similar theme. It’s the usual dilemma in such works with the transmigration theme -stay or go back, however, the story and pacing was rough; it felt all over the place.
The art doesn’t help convey seriousness when needed in my opinion and the other expressions felt off? Maybe they’re practicing. I just laugh it off as cringe comedy. Why cringe? Maybe the dialogue has something to do with it, personally. I’m not even as attentive as most readers and I felt this way (￣∇￣")
Nevertheless, I’ll just read this to the end for closure. ╮(￣▽￣)╭