im sorry i tried to push through and like this but it just has no clear flow like i cant tell where the story is going at all, everytime he gets close to escaping something happens and its just gotten a bit repetitive and now he's doing some weird bit where he pretends to be a kid but the top is still getting hard around him?? yea im outta here
im sorry i tried to push through and like this but it just has no clear flow like i cant tell where the story is going at all, everytime he gets close to escaping something happens and its just gotten a bit repetitive and now he's doing some weird bit where he pretends to be a kid but the top is still getting hard around him?? yea im outta here