The story is a good concept but

ClicheMilk August 4, 2025 9:23 pm

Someone has to be the critic here.

I want to trust that this plot isn't weird but it sounds like it. The vampire has had romantic relations with all of the mcs family?? Does no one think that's gross?? And the plot is going way too quick...it's so disappointing I'll have to drop this i love a good vampire story with amazing art.

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    Kiikii August 4, 2025 9:31 pm

    I don't think it was physical with all of them but only with Arden who is like great great grandparent of Albert who is also coincidentally reincarnation of Arden.if we talk about Albert's father he was just obsessed with Asha for his powers and immortality.

    tomarrist August 4, 2025 9:58 pm

    I need you to understand that not every piece of fiction is gonna be morally right but glad to know you know your boundaries

    MooMoo August 4, 2025 10:00 pm

    I found that weird too. That family is basically livestock for Asha. I wonder if the women who married into the family knew about it. They just breed and raise kids to be there replacements. And once in the mansion they share all share this intimate relationship with Asha. Gross

    Karitoriki August 5, 2025 12:01 am
    I found that weird too. That family is basically livestock for Asha. I wonder if the women who married into the family knew about it. They just breed and raise kids to be there replacements. And once in the man... MooMoo

    This has nothing to do with being gross or not
    Idk why y'all just can't tell that Arden dedicated his whole bloodline so that Asha wouldn't be lonely. They're not livestock because they're not eaten by Asha. They're caretakers, because Arden wanted to do a lot of things with Asha so he dedicated his bloodline to be Asha's....idk... help meet.
    And even if Asha slept with all of them it still doesn't matter because that's what they're there for.
    And bffr you can't expect an immortal to still have morals. Time matters not to them, and so do people. He probably feels safer knowing that it's a particular family attending to him. Basically he's like those gods that receive human sacrifice from a particular family..
    Hope this helps.
    This is just my opinion anyway

    beepcity24 August 5, 2025 4:53 am

    i understand where you’re coming from. it’s not like he’s watching them grow up as he ages tho, that would’ve been a lot more questionable

    sexywifelight August 7, 2025 2:43 am
    This has nothing to do with being gross or notIdk why y'all just can't tell that Arden dedicated his whole bloodline so that Asha wouldn't be lonely. They're not livestock because they're not eaten by Asha. The... Karitoriki

    why are you taking this so deeply its just there opinion so they find it gross what is it to you??

    Karitoriki August 7, 2025 10:05 am
    why are you taking this so deeply its just there opinion so they find it gross what is it to you?? sexywifelight

    The energy I used to reply that person and the energy you're bringing to me is very different. I can understand if it was that person who replied to me. You're coming off as offended and that was not my intention.
    I didn't take anything deeply. I just simply stated the facts that most people would most likely gloss over. I simply said that it's has nothing to do with being gross and I stated exactly why. The first person to reply already said that he might not have gotten physical with all of them and that's why in my comment I didn't feel the need to repeat that, I instead continued by saying even if he slept with all of them it wouldn't matter. Because at the end of the day he's an immortal being. Morals are not to be expected from people who have lived too damn long .

    Maybe my point didn't come across well so I'll just say it plainly. Don't view this book with a moral compass because you'll be grossed out and that is a waste of time. The whole family is a sacrifice to Asha and they are meant to serve him so that's what will continue happening.
    Idk what else to say