i swear they crammed at least 3 novel chapters into this cuz that was a LOT of things j left out. necessary to the plot or not, there's sm about their character expansions & thought processes that's being left out j to get to the point/destination aka the ending. maybe some things don't contribute to the plot, but it contributes to their relationship & j makes the characters feel more fleshed out. rn the characters not only fall flat, but it's like they're j puppets & a means to an end :/ disappointing cuz the art is beautiful & kml was a much greater predecessor compared to this. i wonder if anything's happening to the author behind the scenes?
i swear they crammed at least 3 novel chapters into this cuz that was a LOT of things j left out. necessary to the plot or not, there's sm about their character expansions & thought processes that's being left out j to get to the point/destination aka the ending. maybe some things don't contribute to the plot, but it contributes to their relationship & j makes the characters feel more fleshed out. rn the characters not only fall flat, but it's like they're j puppets & a means to an end :/ disappointing cuz the art is beautiful & kml was a much greater predecessor compared to this. i wonder if anything's happening to the author behind the scenes?