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right? i feel like everything is kind of rushed and off. we missed so many scenes that were kind of important for chase's character development too
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right? i feel like everything is kind of rushed and off. we missed so many scenes that were kind of important for chase's character development too
I know the artist is simply following the novel, but the pacing feels both stiff and off/awkward. I wish they'd add on small details or filler frames/scenes to make the story feel more natural.