IN THE EYE OF A HURRICANE

The real review after finishing it,
I wanted to give it a lower score than what I gave it because them getting back together was kinda hmmm.
But believe it or not it’s more common for them to actually get back together, though seeing them go their separate ways would’ve been phenomenal, it was really mean. I think that guy, the closeted guy was a better person than what they made him be at the send so I do think it was a bit rushed of an ending, was him beating him up domestic abuse? I’m not trying to say it isn’t I genuinely don’t know, because within me I want to say that it was justified the feelings were all over the place and as we know there was definitely a reason some could say was good, when he tried to get away the other one stayed right behind him too and there was definitely regret, but then again isn’t that the way it starts? Had they not gone their own ways a bit it would’ve been a constant ghost in their lives and a ‘valid’ reason why. I might’ve answered myself, violence is never valid because if it was valid that one time, who says it won’t be ‘valid’ every time he remembers the betrayal, yeah for sure shouldn’t have gotten back but I would watch a sequel that shows us exactly why it can’t work anymore because the Trust was destroyed.

I loved the confrontation scene to its fullest I thought it was amazing how zero emotions he went cause that’s how I deal with things zero emotions and I loved the despair right after the cockiness of his partner where he’s like oh I forgot his face already, trust I full gasped but I was not prepared for a DOUBLE full gasp when he said let me help your remember, how’s this remember it now??? Fuuuuuuu I died, up to there I thought it was amazing, and actually I thought the violence was great too, but I think they both ended up becoming monsters they never thought they could become, to the point where I believe they would never work. They could try but I’d love to see it because it wouldn’t work

I mean think about the self hate after being violent and then being told it’s okay by your partner because they gave you a reason and then again and again and violence and violence I think more inner feelings were missing and ending was rushed
If you’re going to give me angst wreck me or go home mama didn’t raise no pussy ass b, this didn’t hurt, there was potential but I’m not crying you know def a good start and that’s why I’ll give it a decent score, I’d read a fanfic w this premise as long as you promise they don’t end up together and I’m not able to be on any of their sides

If anyone wants to recommend one that you think I won’t handle pls Rec